I want to make sure there's nothing to stop your readers from becoming engrossed in your story, so I'll be concentrating on:

 

• inconsistencies within the text

• point of view

• tense

• timeline

• plot holes

• making sure the dialogue is appropriate for the character

• dialogue tags

• too much description

• smoothing awkward sentences

• repetition

• word choice

• basic fact-checking

• spelling, punctuation and grammar

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